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Old November 13, 2009, 09:44 PM   #3
Mal H
Join Date: March 20, 1999
Location: Somewhere in the woods of Northern Virginia
Posts: 15,435
Looks very interesting! I've already put it on the Tivo wishlist in case I forget in January.

Since the site page is brand new, would you like some editing? Yes? Ok.

Sentence 1 - "taken" should be "taking". "some the best" should be "some of the best".
Sentence 2 needs no comma.
Sentence 3 "that most important" should be "the most important".
That's it.
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