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Old January 5, 2013, 01:02 AM   #5
4D5
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Join Date: February 19, 2002
Location: Nevada, Carson Valley
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MB21,

Very well written speech. You put in effort and thought and have good content. When you give your speech, stand proud and give your speech with conviction. The TFL members will be cheering you on.

Here's some things that you may like to give some though.

something that used to be just for automatics, short barreled rifles, and suppressors

something that is currently used to register machine guns, short barreled rifles, and suppressors

that can fire fully automatic
that are capable of fully automatic fire
note:they can also fire in semi-auto mode as well

a round is touched off
a round is discharged
sounds more informative and not like the thoughts and concept you are trying to discourage

taking a law abiding citizen’s means of defense away from him is not the answer

taking a law abiding citizen’s means of defense away is not the answer
will keep the gals on your side
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