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Old October 19, 2012, 09:34 PM   #3
Tom Servo
Join Date: September 27, 2008
Location: Foothills of the Appalachians
Posts: 10,185
You've misspelled the word "violence." I would also remove the adjective "draconian."

Beyond that, it's a very persuasive and (important!) well-structured letter.
In the depth of winter I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer.
--Albert Camus
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