Agree with the others that the crimp is a bit too much. On similar loads for .38 and .357 I use little to almost no crimp. Just barley past making the wall straight again works for me. With .38's and say 2.5 to 2.7 grains bulls eye I just get the wall straight again and make sure they chamber.
Seams like once we the people give what, at the time, seams like a reasonable inch and "they" take the unreasonable mile we can only get that mile back one inch at a time.
No spelun and grammar is not my specialty. So please don't hurt my sensitive little feelings by teasing me about it.