Originally Posted by NightSight
Instead of shredding his letter with criticism, why don't we thank him for his effort and help him make the argument stronger.
It's hard to suggest changes without pointing out weaknesses....
Still happily answering to the call-sign Peetza.
You do not HAVE a soul. You ARE a soul. You HAVE a body.
He is no fool who gives what he can not keep to gain what he can not lose.
-Jim Eliott, paraphrasing Philip Henry.